2015年3月28号托福写作解析
2015-03-28 11:15
来源:北美项目部
作者:颜仕梁
Ø 独立写作题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to finish one project and then go on to another than to work on two or more projects at thesame time.
解析:文章结构
第一段,表明观点,认为一件一件的完成任务不一定比多项任务一起完成好。
第二段,承认一件一件完成任务主要的好处是可以确保project完成的质量。
第三点,按部就班能够确保质量并不代表多任务同时进行就会降低project的之类。(解决办法)
第四段, 另外多任务同时进行会提高工作效率,可以给个人留下更多休息时间。
第五段,总结,虽然一件一件完成任务可以确保质量。但是无任务完成不仅可以确保质量还可以提高工作效率确保更多的休闲时间。
Industrialization has accelerated the pace of daily life, contributing to a hectic life style for modern society. Despite this fact, some people argue that concentrating on one single project is a better option since it allow people to be attentive to the sole task. However, from my perspective, managing multiple tasks is not necessarily an bad option.
Admittedly, finishing step by step will guarantee that things can be done in an effective manner, which may be a good option for certain individuals. Sufficient time can be taken to attend to details of each project to make sure that the projects will be of superior quality. An counter example can demonstrate how disastrous multitasking can be: A more recent study on the effects of multitasking on academic projects found that focusing on more than two projects will inevitably increase the number of errors that may prolong the whole process for all the projects. It is obvious that for some people who are not used to doing projects simultaneously, it is not plausible to be involved more than one project at a time.
However, When people are used to being in charge of multiple projects, they tend to work on them in a more efficient manner. The key to keep the balance between one project and the other is to arrange different tasks in order to maximize the efficiency during process. For example, I had the experience of handling two projects when I was relatively inexperienced at setting up a schedule . It turned out in the beginning that my science project was interrupted by the language project that required me to take videos, which is extremely time consuming. Gradually I figured out a way to reconcile the projects by creating a time table on a daily basis to clarify the tiny goals for me to accomplish. Eventually, I successfully managed to complete both projects with satisfactory grades. Experience allows people to work on projects efficiently.
In conclusion, it is true that working on different tasks at the same time may lead to low efficiency when people who carry out those tasks are not familiar with the process. However, once they acquire necessary experience, the operation of projects may be extremely beneficial.
Ø 综合写作题目:
综合写作部分
今天的综合合介绍了分析战船May Rose下沉的三个theroies:
阅读第一点观点:Gun-ports were flooded. 是说Gun-port(战船侧面放炮口的地方,见下图)还没来得及关好就开始跑了,让海水进来了导致船下沉。听力观点:研究表明,船当时开的很慢,他们不可能在没关掉gun-port的时候就开始出发。
阅读第二点观点:一个幸存船员告知,当时水手们都不听船长的话,甚至当大风来袭时,他们也不遵守命令,导致船沉;听力观点:当时船很大,很快,而且水手都是非常专业,非常有能力的海军,他们即使不喜欢船长也不会不服从命令。
阅读第三点观点:虽然the battle of Solent(地名:索伦特)未定输赢,但是这件事情可以说明法国战胜英国,是一种成功。听力观点:这种理论纯粹是出于政治动机political motive,他不一定赢得了战争,这样说是出于政治目的,来表明他们powerful.
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